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It pains me to watch you burn to embers tonight
your body glows in the flame's pale light.
and as i watch  you burn i can not help but cry
what could have been? what could have been?
these flames are real they tear me up inside
what had you seen? what had you seen?

close my eyes, my body sleeps tonight
but my heart still wants to know if your alright
i have closed my eyes, my pillow is soaked tonight
in tears from the pain of this tortured life

i am waiting on a shread of hope within my soul
you left behind only glowing coal
in my sleep the flames have consumed my mind
is it over? is it over?
©2004-2009 ~Koju
:iconkoju:

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this is not tottaly finished yet but it has been sitting for ever so i decided to submit it because i want to put something out there.

it is about a friendship that is lost. but it isnt done yet to you'll have to wait to see

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:iconj0be:
I dont think so. I mean, who could forget what happened between the two of us the other night? :ROFL:

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j0be
:iconkoju:
ummmm, :wtf: :!:

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and so the sword is drawn with acsii, does this make the keyboard the stronger than them all?
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:iconraeofsonshine:
:tears: beautiful!
i love your work!:D

to j0be... ewww dude!

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~Confucious say...
"A man that has money to burn ,
makes an ash of himself."
:iconkoju:
*wipes tears away* awwwww

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and so the sword is drawn with acsii, does this make the keyboard the stronger than them all?
={===>
:iconraeofsonshine:
:hug::smooch:

--
~Confucious say...
"A man that has money to burn ,
makes an ash of himself."

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October 6, 2004
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